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Re: DoaV (1st version) : Chapter Two
It's fine. That's what people do. Sides, I will be (lol, I should do that soon, since it's on the internet) be taking precautions to protect my copyright--since I have ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: "My Book" (Chapter 5)
Hola! So, why no one told me I'd forgotten to come back here, I do not know. Apparently the little guy sitting on my shoulder who reminds me to do ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter One
The silver moon drifted across the dawning sky. Is it the sky that's dawning, or the sun? I think it's a lovely phrase, but because I am being all critical ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
lol. You know I didn't notice you'd spelt it 'Stowe' until I read the second part? XD Reading this title, I think that the story is going to be about ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
Hmm. I am tempted to say it's a modern tale of a group of people who go about collecting magical-type items that become part of some bigger plot involving an ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Welcome both Lady Kyra and casey_kent! We're glad to have you join our little community and hope you'll be glad you did. :wink: Be seeing you around! ^_^ Keek!
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (1st version) : Chapter Two
Thanks guys! I appreciate your critiques. Woz-Take your time. I know that writing a detailed critique can take time. Thanks for just reading and letting me know you liked it. ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: In The Hand Of The Godess
lol. But isn't George...like 17 when she first arrives in Corus. *counts* o_O He shouldn't be more than 7 years older than her! >_> lol. Now I'll have to go ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: In The Hand Of The Godess
George is the best. ^_^ They're kid is cool too (she has her own sequel! I'm re-reading it right now). And oficially, they actually have...3 kids. =P He's cool though, ...
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Re: In The Hand Of The Godess
Yuppers. remember, they go to the Black City and face those Old Ones or w/e they were called. They expose her for being a girl in an attempt to weaken ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: In The Hand Of The Godess
Yes, he knows. If you read the first book, you'll remember he found out when they fought the bad guys at the end. (he sees her all naked while he's ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Well...hello...i guess.
Hi Lucie. Welcome to YWS! This is a nice site, and it's pretty simple to get around. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask and I'd be ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Out of body Experience
Wanda shifted from foot to foot, looking around. She noticed Keith's bright eyes looking around subtly, but keenly. Marge was right--he was very smart. She closed her eyes, rocking on ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: The Horizon and Beyond
NOTICE Okay, the DT is all set up with Keek's super patented StoryBook organization technique. So would everyone please go over there and post once so I know you all ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: The Horizon and Beyond
"What do you say?" Lea hissed, her tone almost as sharp as her blade. The guard trapped in her arm lock chocked and spluttered excuses. She released him, the force ...
Feb 7, 2008
